ok, I should be on in a few hours but i will try to contact you when we are both on.
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legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️
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1.5/5
Did not really like it:
Here are some things:
-Tons of spelling mistakes
-General mistakes
-Ununderstandable sentences
-No real plot
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legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️Thank you for your opinion, just to put the record straight I am not really good with spelling, gamer, and book writing. But as for the book I don't think $500 is bad for what the buyers got. And if we go after other ppl's writing, then in your revue of it, it should be not understandable, and you lower case I in the last sentence, dose not seem that you are that much better.
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legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️That would fall to the error of sell check, what I meant to say was straight.
Sorry if you are not satisfied with the book. -
legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️A) What do you mean by "I still have a chance to improve it though"?
B) what do you mean by "I still like when it isn't forgotten that the books exist"? -
legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️A) yes
B) ok idk rhat
thank you for the response.
Also I am going to put some more effort into sequel so It will be a bit for it, but I do not know when I expect it to come out. -
legotom001 BuilderBuilder ⛰️ Ex-Mayor ⚒️⚒️
ok guys, sorry to anyone who liked the book, but I will not be coming out with a sequel bc I am working on getting mayor.
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